Monday, December 05, 2005

Unreachable

Too far inside, deepening anxiety,
Prone to explode. But when?

Vortex created;destroying slowly.

Time will tell the unfathomable prediction.

Unthinkable, but true.
It’ll get you, but
right now your unreachable.

Even you can’t handle you.

11 comments:

vishwa said...

Ro,
I remember, once i wrote a similar poem--the words came out very fast and i never edited it. I still remember it because it came, not from thinking but from 'feeling'. A strong feeling brought forth those words, and i guess it's the same with this poem of yours too. Correct?

Ash said...

Hey ro,

sorry, but i dont relish poetry too much.....maybe because i dont understand them .....

but this is what wordsworth says what poetry is all about .....

"the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings from emotions recollected in tranquility."

not recollected in tranquilty but spontaneous i guess, .....

good night cya tomorrow...

SquirmsteR said...

Wow, Ego......That was great, you really got me thinking with that one. You know, It was said before....You really don't know exactly what the author means...only they know the true meaning behind the poem. Again, Awesome. Thanks for sharing!!

the_ego_has_landed said...

HEY! people! thanks for the comments...since none of you could really figure out what I'm talking about...let me explain.
The poem is about the desire to achieve and keep wanting.Its a destructive desire,a passion that cant be controlled...etc...
Sometimes I get that desire..then I learnt to slow down..small things in life help u slow down.

I wrote this while studying for my Optional English exam..hehe...the lesson was about the craze for money..."The Rocking horse winner" by DH lawrence..check it out!
wow longest comment I've written on my blog..LOL!

SquirmsteR said...

Awesome, Ego, that helps a lot more.

And yes...that has to be the longest comment you have posted yet!! (lol)

Ash said...

rocking horse winner .....i was made to read that by my prof who was a lawrence fan .....out and out .....

Ramses-The Ego's Altered said...

made me go..."hmmmm" interesting!!

Delhi's Deviant said...

borin!!abstract and boring!!blogs are supposed to be light reading...or at least the ones i read are supposed to be that. you've really got to concentrate to get this one....and i don't like concentrating.
good work, nonetheless.

the_ego_has_landed said...

thanks rams...hehe..and delhi's deviant...thanks for the critical comment..but to me my blog defines whatver I wanna put up..not just light reading. So who made that rule about blogs???!!!

ani said...

hey wait a min!! this is how i understood it before i read ur explanation for it...
i thought it was the controlling part of the schizophrenic one telling the docile part of oneself abt ruthlessly avenging some great pain that the person has suffered??....
can it mean that too?
anyway cheers on writing a comment longer than your post.. hehe

the_ego_has_landed said...

hey ani..awesome prediction!:) yeah it could totally mean that.But I wrote with desire in mind.